my son...

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

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my son...

My son, open your spirit:

Let my love find your heart missing Mommy’s.
Hear me and feel me in your dreams—lets reminisce.

Close your eyes and see me, my love,
see my love for you as it has always been.

You must not hold sorrow or cold memories,
let my love hold you, only to warm your heart.

And know this: I miss you. I miss my life with you,
as the wind carries my love, my words, my feelings to you.

I love you and want you in my life—know that
this is true, that I am always here for you.

Here these words, my son, and read them out loud,
let their sounds vibrate through your divine body,

into your heart and soul, only
to know this truth: I love you.

For my darling son Timmy on your birthday
Love Mommy

Written by:
Pam Collins/Asha
2010
Editor & Poet Mentor dahlusion
Thank for the assistance
Dear Poet Friend

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Qualin commented on my son...

08-27-2010

I never knew there were Mothers that didn't care untill I was older...I still cannot understand the reason..a wonderful write from the heart...enjoyed every word...your friend Qualin

ApaqRasgirl

08/27/2010

thank you dear for that sweet comment. I wrote this and then broke it down and made to smaller less complex ones for my sons birthday coming soon......thanks for reading, glad you liked it......love asha

Maleficent commented on my son...

08-26-2010

asha, this touches me so deeply... I would love to have my own daughters read it... thanx for sharing it with us all! ;)

am2anangel commented on my son...

08-25-2010

Very sweet write and tribute to your son. I know my sons mean the world to me and can feel the love you have for your son in this piece. well done.- Tonya

ApaqRasgirl

08/25/2010

thank you very much for the sweet comment, I pray that my son will like it when he gets the mail and opens it up......thanks so much love asha

angel33614 commented on my son...

08-25-2010

Beautifully written my dear friend, so much heartfelt and raw emotion the words fly off the page and into the hearts and souls of anyone who reads, bravo! I can only imagine how your son will feel when he reads this, as it is such a touching and warm tribute, pure with the light of your soul and love of your heart! If you are not in touch I can only imagine the hudge hole that must be left in your heart as I can not bare to imagine a world in which my kids are not in my life, to me it would be utter death. Me and my mom are very close and in truth are best friends, this poem touches my heart very deep as i can feel a spiritual touch of grace with each and every word. You are such a telented writter but even more is the greatness and never ending capacity of love youe heart holds, I have saif this before. I may be called angel by name but you are an angel by spirit! If this poem doesn't touch your son's heart in a veru special way I feel it must be made of stone and ice, but even as such this poem as the power to melt the thickest of ice and break apart the stongest of walls. I will pray these words fall into the very fabric of his heart and soul and fills his life with the light and love of your heart. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility yoru dear friend ANGEL

ApaqRasgirl

08/25/2010

thank you so very much my angel poet friend for those words from your heart, I am truly thankful for them, and I am also truly thankful for the help that dah gave me in writing this without him all I seemed to be doing is stumbling over it......thanks you dear.....loves ya asha

gogant commented on my son...

08-25-2010

You followed your heart strings and created a beautiful song of love......a special mother's love for her son versed in truth and splendor............Magnificent piece, Asha............................g

ApaqRasgirl

08/25/2010

thank you dear, I could not have done it without the help that dah gave me...this was the hardest poem I ever tried to write, the first one was really long and too complex for him, so when I stumbled dah was there to pick me up and lend his helping hand.......I am much grateful for his words........thanks for the sweet comment........love asha

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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