My son

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My son asked me to write a poem for him ..how can one ever explain the fear we hold in our hearts and the prayers on our lips? Its a constant battle we wage for our children to come home safe.God's speed Jordan ,to you and your comerades.

My son

For your bethren and his brother
To walk to freedoms light
Then you and all your friends
Will fight with all your might
You serve your country proudly
And stand up strong and tall
Trying always to stay focused
And think ... never will I fall
You .... made your commitment many years ago
And yet it seems the battle you wage
Is always somewhat slow
And when we get to talking
I hear so many things
Your pain ... your strength .... your willingness
To stand at center ring
Although the times are harder
Than any ones before
Sometimes I fall on my knees
And start praying on the floor
Mother's always worry
And wonder what will be
When they see so many of your comerades
Never being free
We test ourselves in all ways
To feel the pain you have
Knowing deep within us
We may never see you laugh
It's a risk you all take
But one can only feel
That when you know it's your son
It makes all the more real

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Musicmynded1 commented on My son

04-26-2010

My wife and i were secretly happy when the recruiting officer told our son that his asthma is preventing him from being able to join.. many prayers your folks way.

eikenbes commented on My son

10-13-2009

Wise words! It is hard for many people to understand what it is to be a mother of a soldier. It is even hard for the soldiers themselves to understand. I will pray for you and your son! God speed & God bless!

GinasDiamond commented on My son

10-06-2009

Very Touching, I love it I look forward to reading more of your poems. Keep up the good work.

jademelissa74 commented on My son

10-04-2009

What a wonderful piece Mufasa! An honorable tribute to your brave son; for which his courage bring us all a pieceful night under the most wonderful country. May the Lord in Heaven build a fence of angels around him and his comrades. Great write!

mufasa

10/05/2009

God bless you for your kind words.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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