MY STAR

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    MY STAR

    Glancing out towards the sky
    My eyes do spy on a star
    Far off in the horizon
    I’m immediately infatuated
    As the star twinkles and shines
    Especially for me
    Upon my first gaze I have decided
    That this new love I must pursue
    As the beckoning is  intense
    Waves of Love increasingly dense
    Call to me and say 
    That the attraction is mutual
    But oh so  far, far away
    So I must build a spaceship is my intent
    To enable me to travel to meet this far away star
    Which has become the object of my desire
    As thoughts  seem to travel closer 
    Her brightness reminds me of my mission
    I draw even closer and her highlights begin to glisten
    As I’m now in orbit, but I began to ponder
    Will this magnetic pull be too much,
    Causing me to loss my gravity and my way home
    But oh her  Beauty is Renown among the stars I have seen
    My Vision is to encircle her
    Until we are Binary
    Two Hearts of Light blasting equal
    Dosages of Luminosity
    For other stars to see, from nebulas
    Back on down to earth
    With light to nourish the trees of life
    Oh the Beauty is so Bright that it  has all but blinded me
    And I fear this far away star
    That represents my love From afar, appears to me
    To be Love’s Brightest Star
    I made not be able to travel today,
    As I’m still figuring the mathematical equations
    So that I can endure the time  inbetween and the coldness of space without love
    Until we are face to face
    So I will have to send this declaration of intent
    To be my emissary, bringing these words of
    Admiration traveling on this unmanned
    Satellite of Words
    Dear Star Love, Your Hi-Lights has me
    So enamored, please send a flare my way
    That is a sign directing me straight into the path
    Of your light, from there I would be content
    To be eclipsed by your Starlight
    Because I would have a bird’s eye view
    Of my  favorite  star......you!
    Glancing out towards the sky
    My eyes do spy on a star
    Far off in the horizon
    I’m immediately infatuated
    As the star twinkles and shines
    Especially for me
    Upon my first gaze I have decided
    That this new love I must pursue
    As the beckoning is  intense
    Waves of Love increasingly dense
    Call to me and say 
    That the attraction is mutual
    But oh so  far, far away
    So I must build a spaceship is my intent
    To enable me to travel to meet this far away star
    Which has become the object of my desire
    As thoughts  seem to travel closer 
    Her brightness reminds me of my mission
    I draw even closer and her highlights begin to glisten
    As I’m now in orbit, but I began to ponder
    Will this magnetic pull be too much,
    Causing me to loss my gravity and my way home
    But oh her  Beauty is Renown among the stars I have seen
    My Vision is to encircle her
    Until we are Binary
    Two Hearts of Light blasting equal
    Dosages of Luminosity
    For other stars to see, from nebulas
    Back on down to earth
    With light to nourish the trees of life
    Oh the Beauty is so Bright that it  has all but blinded me
    And I fear this far away star
    That represents my love From afar, appears to me
    To be Love’s Brightest Star
    I made not be able to travel today,
    As I’m still figuring the mathematical equations
    So that I can endure the time  inbetween and the coldness of space without love
    Until we are face to face
    So I will have to send this declaration of intent
    To be my emissary, bringing these words of
    Admiration traveling on this unmanned
    Satellite of Words
    Dear Star Love, Your Hi-Lights has me
    So enamored, please send a flare my way
    That is a sign directing me straight into the path
    Of your light, from there I would be content
    To be eclipsed by your Starlight
    Because I would have a bird’s eye view
    Of my  favorite  star......you!

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    graceladymn commented on MY STAR

    10-15-2009

    An outrageous write that unclothes the mystery of the universe and its mysterious pattern of formation, you've brought it into sight of our homeland. Totally enjoyable in its metorphoric qualities. Thanks for posting it.

    SILKYTWEED

    10/20/2009

    Thanks for reading this piece....

    jademelissa74 commented on MY STAR

    06-23-2009

    Ahhhhhhhhh.... What a magical piece! You have a way with mystical words! You feel each and every emotion throughout! Great Job!

    SILKYTWEED

    06/23/2009

    Awww shucks....(blush)...thanks Jade, I'm glad you enjoyed it (smile)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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