MY STORY OF FICTION

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MY STORY OF FICTION

Chain bound from within, I have such a deep pain,

That frolics throughout my soul, dancing like rain,

From the pits of my stomach, to the frown on my face,

Ever changing feelings, that I can’t seem to erase,

A tornado of emotion, that stems an eternity inside,

As anger and doubt, rip my seams as they collide,

Torn like a trunk, from the root of an oak tree,

Strong willed is my intention, but needs to be set free,

Like hunters on a path, I find myself at a crossroads,

Destine for destruction, as my thoughts explode,

Moral has indubitably fallen, and my way is obstructed,

Torn across empty space, as I’m silently abducted,

My life for now, is like walking on broken glass,

Cutting like a knife, if not run through too fast,

Slow is the sure way, for my unknown destination,

Constricted by the universe, and this 3D creation,

Direct me to the light, that releases my restriction,

And turn this chapter in my life, into just a story of fiction.

 

07/16/10

MULLIS

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am2anangel commented on MY STORY OF FICTION

07-18-2010

great write excellent rhyme and flow I enjoyed the read. .-tonya

Artie commented on MY STORY OF FICTION

07-18-2010

This one moves back and forth, all all over the place - very well done - 10 from me

Mandi commented on MY STORY OF FICTION

07-18-2010

your writing is so emotional and sad, is there notohing to write about that is happy? I know it would help make yoou feel better tryy it please read some oof mine

ShanneN commented on MY STORY OF FICTION

07-17-2010

very well written, i feel like i can relate to this. which makes me understand it better, therefore, being good. great job!

redbloodink commented on MY STORY OF FICTION

07-16-2010

Oh the story.... none of it is fiction.... I felt conviction in this write but not condemment.... I think Jesus is really calling upon you right now and you should listen cause He don't want you to live in that muck of your thoughts... He shed blood on the cross that day for you to be set free and to have such a peace.... Since He is calling out to you and you are calling out to Him, why don't you take another step and see what He really wants of you... He really does love you for He did die for you.... I hope and pray you find what you are seeking and that is the peace and love of who you are, as I found this I sure hope you do.... red

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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