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    I RESIDE FROM BLUFF TO CONSCIOUSNES OFTEN INSECURE
    I STAND ON TERMS OF RELEVANCE SOMETIMES I CAN ENDURE
    WAS TAUGHT A PLAN OF MORALITY NO ONE CAN IGNORE
    I AM TIRED OF PEOPLE DISRESPECTING ME AND THEY NOT KNOW WHAT FOR
    THEY CAN NOT DIRECT OR INFECT MY BEING IT'S IN MY CONTROL
    BUT YET THEY KEEP ON TRYING EVEN THO THEIR LIPS ARE SORE
    I AM EXACTLY WHO HE HAS MADE ME TO BE AND STILL I ASK FOR MORE
    WAY DOWN DEEP INSIDE MY SOUL IS WHERE HE STORES MY STRENGTH
    BUT QUESTION NOT MY ABILITY TO WIN IT'S NO COINCIDENCE

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    Robby commented on My summary

    10-05-2009

    This poem has you put on the thinking cap, because you have to wonder if it's the way you are. Good work.
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    Ambrosia commented on My summary

    10-04-2009

    You have a way of telling a story without telling the story directly. A very nice way of saying "gtfo" to all the haters lol.
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    christliked

    10/04/2009

    We have to learn to apply all of our senses, reading is more than just visual. you must taste the words, and touch them, smell the air and the sweat, and the fear. words well written take me places that I have never been before on vehicles beyond my imagination

    nhorlandi commented on My summary

    07-10-2009

    congrats! This piece of work looks like logical in thoughts especially the emotion within. I like the last lines, the winning portion. Thanks!
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    everafter commented on My summary

    07-08-2009

    excellently written, easy to be felt. I found myself interlocking with your words, thank you for the way in which you express yourself
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    Charmin commented on My summary

    07-02-2009

    VERY GOOD! I like the emotion in this poem ... it appears to be honest. The sensitivity is also appealing, yet it's not mistaken for weakness, but strength and perseverance. Kudos to you!!
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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