My Tale of Our "Love"

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  • jerseycrtz
  • Your the one for me, and I'm the one for you, take the both of us and we're the perfect two. <3

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This is the story of a very stupid girl who believes a player when he tells her he loves her. She knew that it couldn't be true in the first place but chose to be blind from his horrible ways. Now she has seen what he does and dumps him, but he goes for her best friend. Her best friend falls for his dirty tricks and is now going out with him, only to be broken like the stupid girl who is me.

My Tale of Our "Love"

I thought I liked you
but now I know
that that's not true
it isn't so
So here we go
I'm gonna try again
Been patching up my heart
since who knows when.
So I hope you are happy
that you hurt me in a way
that the pain has to stay there
and it grows larger every day.
You used to comfort me
and show me what was thought to be right
but now I know
those were just lies every night.
I decided to let you go
push your lies and suffering away
then you go for my best friend
and to me that isn't okay.
You know she will fall for your dirty trick
as I did before
but you think your so slick.
Your going to break her heart just like me
because you think I'm history.
You'll tell her you love her but never mean it
And she will never know
but you will never quit.
So now I hope you are happy
with what you have done
you will break 2 hearts in 2 weeks
but gone from your sight is one.

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Teardrops commented on My Tale of Our "Love"

05-21-2010

Honey move on he isnt worth you time or tears he will love one day and she will do the same to him . Marie

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

jerseycrtz’s Poems (61)

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Perfection 0
I Wish 0
Until I forget about you 0
This is What you Get 0
Is The Reason 1
I'm Happy 2
I could make you happier 2
Oh No. 1
I'm tired of Worrying about You 2
My Barbed Wire Fence 1
You may not like me 1
If I could, I would 1
This Face Of Happiness 0
How Much You Mean To Me 1
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My Silent Tears of Pain 2
Finding My Love 0
Let the darkness swallow me 0
He's what I need right now 0
Guilty Pleasure 1
Wish Upon A Star 0
I like someone I shouldnt 0
A Broken Heart Speaks 1
My Tale of Our "Love" 1
The Tears of Desperation 2
You Are My Voice 1
He's mine 4
Feeling Alone Without You 1
Value Who You Are 1
Somebody Help Me 2
My Peaceful Night for You 0
They Want to Know 0
My Mystery Man 2
My Friends and Her 6
This just might be Love 1
Things are good for everyone-but me 2
What Other People Think 1
Love You 0
Boys! 1
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My Lost Love 1
Why do you do this? 0
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Laughter ruined 0
The Darkness 1
What if I haven't? 1
Suicide 0
something you couldn't have 1
I know what your thinking 0
heartbeat 0