My Time Away...


  • Death

    My Time Away...

    He's calling me home, out of myself, and into the vast black.

    As you pull me closer, trying to bring me back to you as if you can bring me back.

    Let me go quietly into the night, let me be finally free of you,

    Desperation claims you when you see me turn a pretty shade of blue.

    The walls are closing in on you, your breaths are ragged and small,

    You'll tell the others like you always do I took a nasty fall.

    This time I've let go, and I won't be coming back this time,

    You will pay in hell for all you've done, for your crimes.

    I will lay in wait, I will petition against you, let the angels know who you are,

    Gabriel picks me up now, and carries me, carries me farther and farther...

    I'm finally free of your angry arms.

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    kpeery09 commented on My Time Away...


    Very Nice, I love it...its awesome. I give you 10 for excellent work

    kage commented on My Time Away...


    lots of anger in this work however it has a line that we can all follow



    It was more despair than anger but yea it's a bit drk, I have some lighter stuff I'll upload on another day

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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