My Tongue

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My Tongue

My tongue, it longs to please you, to taste your hidden treasure/
It yearns to dance along your flesh and bring orgasmic pleasure/
My eyes bore deeply into your soul, as I look at your beautiful face/
My lips touch yours, so plump and full, our tongues hungrily embrace/
I kiss you on the nape of your neck ,the taste there is warm and sweet/
I breathe deeply from the cup on your body where your neck and shoulders meet/
My tongue begins to trace your body, every inch of your heavenly flesh/
My tongue licks, quickly, a hardening nipple, my mouth engulfs your breast/
My tongue begins to follow your stomach, as your body begins to reel/
I kiss, wantonly, on the sides of your hips, as the anticipation builds/
My mouth enjoys your succulent thighs so warm and ready to please/
I begin to part these delicious treats by pushing the inside of your knees/
I lap, doggedly, at your inner thighs, the beast, from its cage, has been sprung/ 
Then I lift your ass, suddenly, to explore that sweet P*$$Y and once again, I begin, with.......MY TONGUE!



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MarionYost commented on My Tongue

05-22-2010

Very nice piece of erotica, Vivid imagery. Nice job. All the best -Marion-

phatdaddee

05/27/2010

Thanks again maiden Marion, I appreciate every time you drop in and peruse what I have to offer here!!

JamilahAyanna commented on My Tongue

05-03-2010

definitely lovin whurr dis poem takes da reader. Lots of vivid images come to mind and I loved dis....very hott yet professionally done, check out Foreplay on my page.....u might find some interest in it...

phatdaddee

05/03/2010

I already read it and I thoroughly enjoyed it! Brought a very warm feeling to my...........heart! Thanks again for reading, I appreciate the feedback!

JamilahAyanna

05/04/2010

Anytyme...

honeybun80 commented on My Tongue

08-23-2009

Wow This is definetly hott...From One erotic poet to another Im lovin this shit..Good Job Luv

phatdaddee

08/25/2009

I knew you would love this one you little perv!! HA HA HA!!! thanks for enjoying my tongue! I aim to please! :-)

GucciGurl commented on My Tongue

08-07-2009

Damn Dammmmmmmmmmn. This is hot ! Got me all bother thinkin bout this and seein my boo soon. One good thing after another.

nmedina commented on My Tongue

07-15-2009

Oh wow!!!! Damn......this was hecka nice to read and in someway dream to. Very well written and full of good feeling.....LOL

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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