My Tourniquet, My Trigger

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    My Tourniquet, My Trigger

    You will never know the power

    of all that you hold

    in your hands,

    your words,

    you can all control.

    Pour your hatred on me

    then make me feel sweet,

    you fill my head with it all.

    I don’t want it

    but I need it.

    You are my tourniquet

    you are my trigger

    and you have all the control.

    So come lay down

    and choose my fate.

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    dahlusion commented on My Tourniquet, My Trigger

    02-06-2013

    Simply powerful: "you are my trigger and you have all the control"
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    Crush commented on My Tourniquet, My Trigger

    09-04-2012

    i was attracted by the title but was never let down at any point as i read through the body of the poem. kudos.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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