My world

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    I was really bored so i wrote this. Its about my dream world what is losing its place in my life. I cant keep re dreaming it. It hurts knowing its not real. And to have to know that i am still the what everyone calls a Freak.

    My world

    The edges of the real world fading.
    To the dark beauty of the night.
    The moon high in the sky.
    Like a lone king on his throne.
    The soft ripples of water touching the sand.
    The forsets around the beach dark.
    Calling to me.
    The breeze cold.
    The stars blaze above my head.
    My world.
    I gaze at the true beauty of  my world.
    For it is fading now.
    Perhapes it is just a dream.
    For one i will long to revist.
    Yet it's fading deep with in my mind.
    For it's beauty will be lost.
    For it is the last place i can ecsape to.
    To escape my depression.
    To escape the pain.
    To escape the rest of the world.
    For the path way is breaking.
    For the breeze waves it's last goodbye.
    The water crashing on the shore,
    As if saying dont leave.
    My heart longs to go back.
    My world.
    For it will fade.
    It will fade.

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    Nadia1986 commented on My world

    09-25-2009

    Nice work and for the record I for one do not think your a freak!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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