Mystery of Penetration

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    Never for a moment think that I am far

    Mystery of Penetration

    Mystery of penetration holds the gaze upon the field
    Depth of watchful patience until everything is healed
    Unabashed, driven, nucleus of inward fires revealed
    Layer by layer stripped, raw, naked, soon unsealed
    Misunderstandings and misperceptions will be peeled
    It is the job of love to require the inner-heart to yield

    You, my friend have striven to heal folks while your wounds bleed
    You are careful not to permit others close enough to proceed
    Heart of my heart close your eyes and take heed
    Unwavering, I hold the field and from here I can feel your need
    I am not weak and stumbling but faithful until you have agreed
    Gentle, true, with love shall I reach into your soul until the pain recedes

    Graceladymn 10/5/09

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    dancinghawk commented on Mystery of Penetration

    10-05-2009

    love is patient ... love is kind ... modern words for an ancient true story ... and great insight on the barriers we put up ... nicely done ... thx for the beautiful post!

    graceladymn

    10/05/2009

    Yes, we do it for each other. Thank you for taking time to read and comment with your insights.

    Tempy commented on Mystery of Penetration

    10-05-2009

    This was really good. I enjoyed the flow of it, and the general message. You have a beautiful soul.

    graceladymn

    10/05/2009

    Thank you, so do you Tempy.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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