mystery's plan

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    mystery's plan

    Locked in a castle tower
    alone in despair,

    I sat in waiting
    for someone to care.

    Many came by with
    notions of love,
    but none of them touched me
    with light from above.

    Each one drained me
    taking away my essene,
    till one day a wizard entered
    my presence.

    He casted a spell of mystic delight,
    and held me spell-bond
    but for a night.

    Wrapped me in spender
    in mystery's plan,
    he gave me wings to fly
    and told me I can.

    By mornings light he was gone
    in a instant,
    but the love that he gave
    will journey the distance.

    The gift he imparted will not be in vain,
    for in my soul his magic remains.

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    Rocetman commented on mystery's plan

    07-13-2009

    I had to read one more, and I'm glad it was this one! I added this to my fav's!! c-ya!! again.

    Madelynn commented on mystery's plan

    07-13-2009

    Now thats a fairy tale!! Your rhyming is so spot on-perfect.Its simple but so entertaining!-I just so enjoy your work!

    JCKasper commented on mystery's plan

    06-21-2009

    Inspiring and well written. It has a nice even flow and leaves much to the imagination! Captivating and instills the feeling of hope that we long for.

    ginga commented on mystery's plan

    06-21-2009

    Nice setting for an uplifting message. I love that the wizard played a significant role. Short and succinct. ginga

    randomthoughts commented on mystery's plan

    06-21-2009

    I really like this one... ..... ....... ....... .. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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