• Fantasy

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    This is a poem that I am using in my story. Myth.


    When evil comes

    And sit upon the thrown

    Beware of their red marked ones

    A babe will be born

    Of half born blood

    A golden crest

    Upon the neck

     Shall be blessed

    With the goddess gift

    The goddess crest

    The star in movement

    The world saved not bent.

    All will be well all will be saved.

    The gifted one will come.

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    Platti commented on myth


    this seems rather interesting, not exactly my cup of tea but interesting nonetheless



    oh well it a poem around a story i am writing.

    icu2 commented on myth


    Sounds like something to write a whole story around. Good job!



    I am this in an excerpt from my story Myth

    Paige commented on myth


    Sooo, was this a dream you had or what? lol, im just kidding with you. I like it and its a very enjoyable read. Keep writing!!!!!



    It was part of a story i am writing

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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