naked cigarettes

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    naked cigarettes

    this place we meet
    a soft surrender of sweetness
    skin glows
    under
    moonlit branches
    shadows
    your eyes
    shine
    a blue embrace
    of nocturnal fire
    a release of
    breath
    of held secrets
    unseen desire
    trembling bodies
    collide
    ruby red lips
    meet
    again
    succumbing to
    your subtle projections
    of silent
    intentions
    against all sanity
    amidst all truth
    a place
    only we
    meet
    and in this truth
    we create
    understanding

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    Qualin commented on naked cigarettes

    03-18-2010

    YOU ARE WHAT YOU ARE...................................................................QUALIN

    wagus commented on naked cigarettes

    06-16-2009

    Guess never had enough of what most do before they light up to get the smoking habit... well done way laid out not easy read for me needs to be framed some order to lines... but still good read just see it first and looks often set mind to a mood.. mine needs order borders as well as a good read... so liked this one...

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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