• Love



    i do all of my finger pointing in the mirror
    because everything is clearer when you tell the truth
    love isn't as easy
    love, loves itself and delights in the parades
    we throw for her
    we will jump on the grenades
    thrown at her
    we dance at her parties and drink fully
    from her bowls
    love is so attractive heaven knows
    i have spent years chasing love
    catching up to her once or twice
    and our conversations are always the same
    i am lost without you
    please tell me your name


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    Logik commented on name


    i like the flow of this piece the way you put it is great man. you and I think alike.



    oh thank you so much ! love your work, mate.

    Insideme commented on name


    I like the way you personified love as a woman, it's fitting, not many men fit that role.great write phission.



    thank you for your time and comment....i have enjoyed reading your work !

    ginga commented on name


    Phission, Ahh personification is always a treat and especially here when love reveals that it wants to be caressed. ginga



    thank you for your time and pleasantries !

    gmcookie commented on name


    This is quite a good little poem, my friend. I like the way you use rhyme...



    thank you, very, very much for your time.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    Phission’s Poems (24)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    hands 1
    freight rain 2
    goodbye 8
    sensual central 1
    goodnight, summer night 3
    the robin 2
    gun 4
    top of the sky 2
    eulogy 2
    do you love me 3
    i lost her 4
    home 2
    observations in random rows 3
    these days 1
    music and dreams 3
    point blank 5
    the gift 2
    breathing love 6
    position 8
    name 5
    one 3
    companion 2
    beware 4
    this ( for annie ) 3