Natural Disaster

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    Natural Disaster
    Darkened clouds wind and train
    Left alone with all this pain
    Its winter here without you

    Landslides always drag me down
    Traps me for days will I be found?
    I pray for skies of blue

    Flooded plains within my head
    Tornadoes draw near leave me for dead
    I feel alone without you

    Drought from tears I know not for
    I've cried for days, I cry nomore
    I've made a mistake it's true

    Hurricane waves poundin my shore
    I'm drowning on my bedroom floor
    Will we ever be together again?

    This natural bridge from heart to heart
    Collapsed in shreds fallen apart
    These seasons last forever

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    unmaker commented on Natural Disaster

    03-24-2009

    i like parts of this one alot, but the imagery didn't capture me. also, you should consider the impact that poor spellchecking has on the reader, it may be more important than you realize. you are a gifted poet, i am just trying to give you some advice, don't take it harshly.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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