Nature Doodle

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    Nature Doodle

    Who,
    Where,
    What,
    Why,
    Could the answer be in the sky?

    Pondering clouds,
    Pondering stars,
    Is that how we find,
    Who we are?

    Imagine the woods,
    All primitive and stark,
    What do you see,
    When you look at the bark?

    Everything's connected,
    In some way,
    Who in the end,
    Will be the one to pay?

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    earthly commented on Nature Doodle

    09-04-2010

    Circle of life-not quite 360 degrees-nice-Namaste...Earthly

    Rhymer commented on Nature Doodle

    09-04-2010

    Every thing connected in some way who will be the one to pay. Mankind I'm afraid. Excellent write.

    rsalassi commented on Nature Doodle

    09-04-2010

    I loved this til I got to the last line which I fail to see how it connects. A nice fantasy write, nonetheless.

    dahlusion commented on Nature Doodle

    03-24-2010

    Such a playful little poetic gem filled with perfect rhymes. Bravo!!!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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