Needed gifted ones

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Needed gifted ones

For those who have the gift, give me some of it
The kind that shatters mirrors, that melts steel
let me peer in
Into the world that hides from me
The fences are white, the decor is set
Roses on the table, a sign of love
Can I enter your soul, take over your body, live your life
Will it some up the question for me
Everything has order, but does that everything involve me
Holding out my hands out for crumbs
I sit and ponder
Flipping this life over, reading it in reversal
The opposite of the mirror
My rights, my left
Is that the reality I need or want
To leave my chaotic disorder
To abandon my demons from hell
Sit and wait for my knight in armor on a white horse at that
I think reality is my best recourse
Eating me, feeding me, spitting me out
I educate again
Love is given freely too many time, choose wisely
It will consume you, abuse you , suck the life from your body and spit you out
Gifted be aware the dark needs your light
So shine for me

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Artie commented on Needed gifted ones

06-17-2009

I really, really like this!!! Every now and then you read something that comes from a person's core, and I believe this is one of those times. 10 from me.

Jes

06/18/2009

My core is deep my friend There are so many different layers to me, that I keep myself busy peeling them away searching for the one that satiates my thirst Thanks Jes

bforibus commented on Needed gifted ones

06-16-2009

i diffently enjoyed this write. it was more so philisophical then dark. i was drawn in either way. very good job.

DeepEclipse commented on Needed gifted ones

06-15-2009

I like how this poem challenges its own limits. I relate to it's hunger for growth, it's desire to pierce the mystery.

Jes

06/16/2009

I like your comments hunger for growth.. sits and waits for the time to pounce..Smiling Jes

WordSlinger commented on Needed gifted ones

06-12-2009

This original, reminds of one trying to get out of a haunted house, the trapped feeling, but so tired of it, decides to not fight, but laugh at it., Interesting write..

Jes

06/12/2009

I like dark things. Thing I don't understand inside myself, the thoughts. Digging deep inside dragging the demons with me haha Smile Jes Glad u think it interesting

SuSpence commented on Needed gifted ones

06-08-2009

This is a very good poem, but it makes me sad. You must hold on to hope. Some have died for love, others have fought entire wars in the name of love, it brings out the best and worst in mankind, much like religion. For me Love is my religion, I live for it, long for it, pray to its alter each day, waiting for the day it speaks to me, the day I am saved. Until my time comes I wait, clinging to hope for it is all that is left. From now until then, I will share with you all that you need, and I always will I leave you a rose @~~~~~

Jes

06/08/2009

Love is a universal word.. i have to digg deep into myself...But I will find her... LOVE..I love the rose. I smile deeply Jes

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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