NEW SONG!!!- Life is like a song (you just gotta write the lyrics)

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NEW SONG!!!- Life is like a song (you just gotta write the lyrics)

v1:
music came in to my life.
when ther was so much termole goin on around me.

maybe you'll play by fire or maybe you'll play by ear.

Can you pic this.I have poertry over flowing all on me.

and now take your fist and try to make a beat with it.

Now that was action.

and now and chemistry attraction.

mix it all together.

 

:CHOURES:

LIFE IS LIKE A SONG. YOU JUST GOTTA WRITE THE LYRICS.

AND Love is like a poem. the feeling is so strong.

and while i write this song.

it plays on and on and on.

life is like music when you take the time to listen.

 

 

v2:

Love is like a gift.

music at your finger tip's.

can you feel the base of my heart.

playing over and over in your head.
now you catch my drift.
shouldv listen to my words to this song.

 can you picture this it was me right here. right in front of you.now you take your fist and make it beat with it.

yes life gose on...i'll rember your lyrics to this song.

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1990lh commented on NEW SONG!!!- Life is like a song (you just gotta write the lyrics)

06-27-2010

oh cool song wish i could hear it. haha i cant sing but i like to try and right songs every now and then but i dont think their any good, but love your lyrics. "Life is like a song (you just gotta write the lyrics)" that title actually reminds me of my poem same old song. gove it a read when ya get chance . thxs for sharing. love & peace. 90

SuSpence commented on NEW SONG!!!- Life is like a song (you just gotta write the lyrics)

06-27-2010

I too write songs and lyrics, I really apprecitated this one. The thought put into it, I can almost hear the music as my eyes dance across your words. Excellant. ~Spence

ginga commented on NEW SONG!!!- Life is like a song (you just gotta write the lyrics)

06-26-2010

Qualin, I am imagining that this is a light pop-rock beat. Clever and catchy. giga

Qualin commented on NEW SONG!!!- Life is like a song (you just gotta write the lyrics)

06-26-2010

ANOTHER SURPRISE...YOU ARE TALENTED GAL.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK..ENJOYED THIS ONE...BEING A PICKER MYSELF...QUALIN

MootPoint commented on NEW SONG!!!- Life is like a song (you just gotta write the lyrics)

06-22-2010

I am responding because I so your post in a forum. Please pass this through a speller. I don't mind things like gotta and goin, but poertry, and termole?

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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