New World

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There is a New World coming. Are You Ready? Transcend this!

New World



New World

When after the richness of earth was stolen,
the green and the gold.
Swirled were the ashes, in dust and stone,
 bold and old.

Swept along a cosmic droplet,
heavens portal, a gateway to assault.
Darkness mounting, ready your soul.
Again, we go unlock the vault.

Muster your consciousness, assemble intellect,
fasten your gaze upon the diamond within.
Align yourself, awakening dawns shiny luster,
as the spiritual warfare vortex begins to spin.

Re-member past, present and future,
unfurling in timeless warp.
Let go, ego. Remove all thwart.

The World will shudder and fold.
Birthing a new world, through our minds,
to behold.


-M. Jacobs

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HarverTomsson commented on New World

12-01-2010

Fantastical, dazzling, captivating. Bravo for your work. Harv

danmartyjake1

12/02/2010

Thank you for yours, as well, many thanks for your brilliant comments. Stay tuned. Smiles! ;-)

soulwriter commented on New World

12-01-2010

I love the depth of this - the experience unfolding and the even deeper story of allegory untold. "Align yourself, awakening dawns shiny luster, as the spiritual warfare vortex begins to spin Grand illusion! Soul

danmartyjake1

12/01/2010

Your comments speak deeply of your passion and compassion for enlightenment of the soul. Thanks for your compelling response to it.

AmadeusEx commented on New World

09-20-2010

this was masculine and striking but soft around the edges...not something im used to reading from female authors, and i enjoyed it

danmartyjake1

09/21/2010

I appreciate your candid response to it. You know they say that there is a masculine and a feminine side to each of us, whoever they is, but I think it's true. You might like "Seraph Seduction". Thanks for tuning into my channel for a moment. Cheers!

Marsink commented on New World

09-10-2010

A wonderfully told warning of jarring details and great marching rhythms. I can see the investment of your time to produce this shining gem! 10!

danmartyjake1

09/22/2010

So Many thanks! You are so kind. ;-)

ApaqRasgirl commented on New World

07-29-2010

that was great dear friend, a very poetic write.....I loved it..thanks for the wonderful read. love asha

danmartyjake1

07/30/2010

Many thanks, Asha, so blessed to hear from you and grateful it inspired you.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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