Next Lifetime
Today the wind blew i instantly thought of you.the breeze from the trees, earths creation brought me to my knees.i had to stop and thank god im so blessed.sometimes it gets hard being without you i cant rest.the way you whisper my name,the sweet love making pain ha you know i like it like that.the way you pull my hair and hit it from the back.the way your love embraces my curves. sending chills through my nerves.so far away but always in my heart.so i take this vow to never part,submitting my entire being mind body and soul, to love honor, cherish and hold.soon i would bare the seed of your unborn and claim everything that's was promised to me it was sworn,then something happened i felt empty so inside, the dream faded away i almost died,i reached out to you but you walked away,not giving me a chance to even hear what i had to say,you lost the vision of hope and happiness someday,but it ended this dream of passion of mine maybe it will happen again next life time.Next Lifetime
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Tags: Life Love Dream Fantasy
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slimgoodwoody commented on Next Lifetime
01-06-2011
- Passion, pleasure, happiness and pain! These emotions we repeat again and again! Good poem!
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PoeticSylenz commented on Next Lifetime
12-23-2009
- Nice flow...loving your style. The way you flip the script in the end is very creative
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SILKYTWEED commented on Next Lifetime
06-24-2009
- Beautiful Write....nice flow, as the poem builds and let's you down easy with optimism...Thanks for sharing!
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donta313 commented on Next Lifetime
06-02-2009
- love it beautiful i must say you have a way with words as if your living the story very sensual and erotic with a nice imaginative twist.
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mistajackson commented on Next Lifetime
05-30-2009
- I LIKE IT CAUGHT MY ATTENTION A LITTLE SEX STORY A LITTLE PAIN HURT GOOD IMAGERY ALL IN ALL A GOOD POEM
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