Night Scene

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    This is from the evenings of the meteor showers... the show wasn't as grand as I hoped.. But it was still extrememly nice to watch what was there..

    Night Scene

    Night Scene

     

    The Cypress trees brush their fingertips

    Into the velvety ink,

    Painting the skyscape the rich color of night.

    It grows darker as it dries.

    The crickets chirrup in approval,

    The Moon arrives and sinks into its arm chair

    Stars sparkle in delight

    The big dipper dips,

    And the hooty owl hoots,

    Darkness cloaks the land

     finally...

    The meteor show begins.

     

    Katylove©2009

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Night Scene

    07-22-2010

    Your words bring this event and all the tiny details of it to life. Wonderful.
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    freind commented on Night Scene

    01-30-2010

    yes this sounds like anice summer night. kinda reminds me of when i was a kid i liked this much
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    gogant commented on Night Scene

    01-24-2010

    You take an artistic vision of a simple thing as watching shooting stars, tuning it into a magnificent panoramic canvas of beauty. Quite remarkable, Katy. Hey, I wrote a poem...Katy O' Grady....that is not meant to be a plug...it's a silly little ditty of a poem.........................................................gogant
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    Artie commented on Night Scene

    10-18-2009

    Nice piece- You have an excellent way of telling a story.
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    dragonfly1023 commented on Night Scene

    08-19-2009

    memorable thoughts from a memorable event. there's nothing more humbling than to view celestial events in the heavens above. really puts things into perspective. great write.
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    Katylove

    08/19/2009

    Thank You DFly~.. you are incredibly kind~

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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