Night Visions (Prophecy)

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This is dedicated to those who have the gift of vision in dreams. Dont fear what seems to be and end because out of all bad things good will come and only the God you believe in knows the end and all parts of what is to be. Prophecy isnt a 100% accurate thing but rather an indicator or guide to help us. As Winston Churchhill said "THE ONLY THING WE HAVE TO FEAR IS FEAR ITSELF". So much wisdom in that one sentence.

Night Visions (Prophecy)

Most dreams I dream burn away
with the dawning light of each new day
but still there are those that remain.

Dense with layered prophecies
and people who think they know true belief
that say I'm damned and cause me pain.

Terror fills subconscious in the dark
fear spills over weighing heavy on my heart
but the small things get me through.

The thought of smiles on my kid's faces
always chases doubt and replaces
dread giving me happiness and pride.

The care of my cat feeling my emotions
the sound of her purr is a good potion
for the troubles stirring inside.

Often my visions in sleep come true
but never in a bird's eye view
only bits of the real picture do I see.

Even when they are the worst
and I cry because Im ripe to burst
The good follows the bad that may fall on me.

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kdarcy commented on Night Visions (Prophecy)

11-14-2010

It is a good thing we can't / don't remember them all upon the light of day. Enjoyed the read, some great word combinations here, be well k

ginga commented on Night Visions (Prophecy)

07-23-2010

insideme, The flow here is quite impressive. The night dreams stated, then fears/doubts, until the fallout wraps it up with a more optimism in the air. Well written. ginga

Mangus commented on Night Visions (Prophecy)

07-19-2010

The mark of writer is one who can reach into the pit of their soul and speak intelligently about it. Often sometimes we are afraid to write we see. Even though it was meant to betold or else would have never saw it the first place .... Impressive ...keep scribing form the soul

prophesy commented on Night Visions (Prophecy)

07-15-2010

you are a true writer, for insideme bares alot of deep and inspiring medfores. continue the ways of water, for the words that you write are insideme also. /from poet 2 poet

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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