Nightmare

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Nightmare

My eyes flutter open,
Yet to no avail.
The demon's still there.
It's black eyes bore into mine
As though they're boring into my soul.
They flutter closed again,
 Still to no avail.
I see the demon in my mind.
I toss and turn,
Shake and bite.
I roll over,
I scream,
I'm being shaken.
I open my eyes once more.
The demon is gone,
The nightmare over.

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Embraced commented on Nightmare

09-10-2010

This started out peppered with evil, yet relaxed with its own innocence in the end. I loved it. E~

himekachan111

09/10/2010

ty

DeepEclipse commented on Nightmare

09-08-2010

They seem to have a mind of their own. Perhaps gone only for the moment. Sometimes you really feel you have no control.

himekachan111

09/08/2010

agreed

lostalive77 commented on Nightmare

09-01-2009

wow detailed. i like it. reminds me of something that happened to me a few nights ago

himekachan111

09/02/2009

lol. that's not even half off the nightmare either. that was like the last 5-10 minutes pf the nightmare. i might right more about it later.

KristyLoren commented on Nightmare

09-01-2009

Excellently written and so young, how nice. I enjoyed your piece so much, and I am the real deal I would tell you if I didn't. Your imposing is brilliant. Great piece I love it!!! You get my ten, not easily done. Your a talented young woman :)

himekachan111

09/01/2009

thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoy my work. I enjoy yours as well.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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