Nightmares

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This is a poem about my nightmares. well one of them, they always change they are so bad to the point i hate sleeping. My dreams are always plauged with nightmares.

Nightmares

My feet make no noise on the dead grass,
My sins following behind me like hungery dogs,
Red eyes stare into the mirror,
Skin broken lace-like scars,
Lips sewed together,
no screams can be heard,
From the monster I see...
Until I relize that its me in the mirror.
I see them in the shadows coming to get me,
They wrap around me,
Lies, Lust, Anger, And Fear
There bodys mangled past the point of return,
Eyes that always seeing always open,
Bore into mine,
The broken mirror showing us what we dont wanna see,
What we look like on the inside,
Then I see its raining,
Yet its not water,
Its blood thick and cold,
Its smell overbearing,
Fear he is tighening his grip,
Whispering a soft tune in my ear,
Its to dark to be Lullabye,
Yet I cant help but listening,
My arms no longer moving,
Stitching holding my wrists and fingers still on,
Skin that is dyed a crimson,
Yet blue veins clearly showing,
Nightmares,
Why do you still claim me?
I do not dervser them,
I was kind yet,
You show yourself to me,
Nightmares why must you call to me?

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HopeOhlarik commented on Nightmares

09-18-2010

Honestly to me it kinda sounds like you have very bad spirits in your house. My sister had a dream that was, but wasn't like that. If that makes sense @_@ I'd suggest you talk to someone about cleansing your house. Or you might go to your local herb store and ask for sage sticks, and talk to me later about what to do with them. Good poem though!

OutcastAmber

09/19/2010

Yeah it makes sense about what your saying. It sometimes helps if i burn Lavender insents it does not always work. I put prayers in my room and it a holy water circul in it, at times if i streathen the circul the nightmares get way worse.

sk8erpoet commented on Nightmares

09-18-2010

it is a great poem.... kinda creepy in a way....great write....sk8

OutcastAmber

09/18/2010

Thanks. If you are looking to read happy stuff i dont write that lol. I always write stuff thats creepy and sad in ways.

nonners commented on Nightmares

09-18-2010

very creepy but i likey.....................well done bravo

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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