No Concentration

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    No Concentration

     Tired of no sleep - no real dreams, shaking from the inner restlessness.
    Broken pieces of thought, concentration is lost.
    Moments fade until I see the clearness of the corner,
    The open windows.
    Fog comes upon me without my focus.
    I am in a fever inside,
    Atmospheric craving in my very blood.
    Don't like the coldness, the clouds in my vision.
    Remove them!
    Disappate, evaporate, go!
    Bring me the windows,
    The corner.
    Bring me my solace.
    I have no concentration.

    11-24-04

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    laydbak1 commented on No Concentration

    07-01-2009

    This one brings on a sense of a crowded mind and soul begging for release... A good write
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    dovesofpeace commented on No Concentration

    05-27-2009

    This is a GREAT poem also sis! I love to read poems that are so deep with feelings. I guess that is what is so great about poems. The true feelings of one self. Thank you for sharing it!
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    MandyJ

    09/01/2009

    Hi Janet. Boy, it has been a while hasn't it? I still keep you in my prayers. I just thought you should know that. Thanks for all your responses to my poetry. We really need to chat again one of these darn days. :-)

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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