No Longer Mine
The love of my life
Had a name
A face
A distinct smell
He was and is real
Just no longer mine
Had a name
A face
A distinct smell
He was and is real
Just no longer mine
No Longer Mine
7 Comments
Tags: Lost Love
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Qualin commented on No Longer Mine
02-01-2010
- VERY GOOD WRITE DEEP ONLY A TRUE LOVER WOULD UNDERSTAND THAT SMELL IS DESTINCTIVE TO THE ONE WHO LOVES YOU ...I HAVE HEARD MANY SAYING AT THE LOSS OF A LOVED ONE "I CAN STILL SMELL THEM"...V-GOOD QUALIN
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EbonyQueen48 commented on No Longer Mine
06-10-2009
- blunt and to the point, see it doesn't take a whole page to express a broken relationship, very good poem, i hope to read more of your work!!
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kdarcy commented on No Longer Mine
04-12-2009
- Had one like that myself once, short but sweet
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JTRAIN commented on No Longer Mine
03-04-2009
- short and sweet but i like it
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Nicko7 commented on No Longer Mine
02-20-2009
- now that is short but good
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