No More Pain

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  • VampireGirl666
  • you broke my heart.. now i break your fucking face...

Poem Commentary

This poem is about one of my best friends who commited suicide from all the shyt she went through

No More Pain

No more pain, or the tears she cried.
No more pain, for her to hide.
No more pain, Cause she'll be happy forever.
No more pain, Can hurt her never.

No more pain, for her bleeding heart.
No more pain, to tear it apart
No more pain, in her eyes so blue
No more pain, for me or you

No more pain, Can hurt her now
No more pain, not none no how
No more pain, For that little girl
No more pain, In the other world

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killingP13 commented on No More Pain

02-11-2011

sometimes pain is what lets you know your alive...very well done great write :)

DaveyLee commented on No More Pain

10-10-2009

very nice! it makes your mind wander to all the conclusions of why there is no more of that pain

DarkChi commented on No More Pain

10-09-2009

nice. sounds like this little girl will be happy....where ever she is

VampireGirl666

10/09/2009

yupp...shes happy and no one can hurt her ever again...

alacrity commented on No More Pain

06-13-2009

Hi VampireGirl666 This is the first of your poems that you have posted that I've read--I like what I've read so far--I'm going to read more of your poetry(and looking forward to it) I'm sure I'll better be able to give you feedback then-I really like this first poem of yours that I've read

VampireGirl666

08/25/2009

awwwww. thanks. whenever i get a chance ill post like 12 in one day xD thanks this makes me happy

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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