No More Pain

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    • VampireGirl666
    • you broke my heart.. now i break your fucking face...

    Poem Commentary

    This poem is about one of my best friends who commited suicide from all the shyt she went through

    No More Pain

     No more pain, or the tears she cried.
    No more pain, for her to hide.
    No more pain, Cause she'll be happy forever.
    No more pain, Can hurt her never.

    No more pain, for her bleeding heart.
    No more pain, to tear it apart
    No more pain, in her eyes so blue
    No more pain, for me or you

    No more pain, Can hurt her now
    No more pain, not none no how
    No more pain, For that little girl
    No more pain, In the other world

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    killingP13 commented on No More Pain

    02-11-2011

    sometimes pain is what lets you know your alive...very well done great write :)
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    DaveyLee commented on No More Pain

    10-10-2009

    very nice! it makes your mind wander to all the conclusions of why there is no more of that pain
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    DarkChi commented on No More Pain

    10-09-2009

    nice. sounds like this little girl will be happy....where ever she is
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    VampireGirl666

    10/09/2009

    yupp...shes happy and no one can hurt her ever again...

    alacrity commented on No More Pain

    06-13-2009

    Hi VampireGirl666 This is the first of your poems that you have posted that I've read--I like what I've read so far--I'm going to read more of your poetry(and looking forward to it) I'm sure I'll better be able to give you feedback then-I really like this first poem of yours that I've read
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    VampireGirl666

    08/25/2009

    awwwww. thanks. whenever i get a chance ill post like 12 in one day xD thanks this makes me happy

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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