No One Can Understand

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    No One Can Understand

    Your light shines in my eyes,
    but I wish you'd rise so that you can set.
    Because during your rein
    he just yells.
    I can't deal with it anymore-
    I'm crawling on the floor-
    He's screaming.
    All I want to do is cry,
    but he calls me a child.
    I'm drowning-it's wet-
    He's screaming.
    All I want to do is die
    I let go to fall,
    but he's pulling me up again-
    He's screaming.
    I cry out "Why?"
    He calls me a child.
    I'm broken on the floor-
    He's screaming.
    Your light no longer shines.
    I no longer fear just your rise-
    He's screaming.

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    toredbloodink commented on No One Can Understand

    03-14-2017

    Wow I by just read this again. I'm still in great debate of life. This is beautiful no matter what it means... After I read the poem I saw redbloodink had commented before . I am the original redbloodink.... Amazing write
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    redbloodink commented on No One Can Understand

    06-15-2010

    Is it man or God....... Man is the yeller and God is subtle...... No-one should yell at us.... I turn and run from it...... red
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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