Not Me

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  • Passion

    Not Me

    Would I scare you
    If I shared
    The Painfully Wonderful way
    You occupy me?
    What if I told you
    Of the physical anguish
    That ensues
    When you're not around?
    If you're not touching me,
    Touch fails to exist.
    If I'm not locked with you,
    In a kiss,
    Kissing is foreign.
    Would you run?
    Would it freighten you
    To know
    That it's worse when you're here?
    To know that you don't
    Truly know.
    You will never know.
    The only way you could
    Is to feel it.
    And you don't,
    At least not for me.

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    Len commented on Not Me

    11-04-2011

    This write flows from the mind directly to the heart, I will be adding it to my fav's for sure.

    SILKYTWEED commented on Not Me

    09-30-2009

    Deep and Powerful Write....now that is pouring it all out and laying up on the table (smile)....Thanks for sharing!

    Ming commented on Not Me

    04-17-2009

    Beautifully written, quite expressive. It can be felt, the passion. Good Stuff, I'll be reading more of you. Ming

    kdarcy commented on Not Me

    04-12-2009

    Loved it, great key words scattered thru-out the piece, great read, loved the whole concept of the words. I have several up, be well

    Nicko7 commented on Not Me

    02-20-2009

    I know this one, and i guess a lot of us do if we honest Beautifully put well written Girl you got style

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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