Not naming, bc it's an ex... N i am taking care of her privacy....

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    The was a poem written in 07, I know it's old, but till I can come up with more, I am post all of my old ones.....

    Not naming, bc it's an ex... N i am taking care of her privacy....

    She is sweet,
    She is neat,
    She likes to have fun,
    I love that she is my one,
    ONLY,
    She is all I want,
    In a woman,
    I could ask,
    For nothing more,
    She is the one I adore,

    Everyone thinks,
    I like the world to revolve,
    Around me,
    They don't know,
    My world,
    Revolves around her,

    She has three,
    Wonderful kids,
    Only two,
    I know,
    Also adore,
    The third,
    She has told me about him,
    He sounds fun,
    Like his mom,
    I love her,
    That's the only thing I can say,
    Nothing more....

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    BooTz commented on Not naming, bc it's an ex... N i am taking care of her privacy....

    08-26-2009

    this is bittersweet piece. makes u wonder what else she has to offer. makes u wonder about the 3rd child. this piece leaves me wondering in general lol

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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