Not right

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  • Emotional
    • Allie
    • In Love and ready to start writting again.

    Not right

    So many times I gave in
    to many times I've let you back in.
    You say you miss but that not true
    You only miss the few hours of pleasure I give to you.
    You cannot just walk in and out of my life
    Each time you do I breakdown and cry.
    It's not right to play with my heart
    Just go ahead and leave before we start.
    You think you've fooled me
    Baby im not a fool.
    You cannot hide the running you do
    You cannot lie becuase the truth will find you.
    You cannot just walk in and out of my life
    To many times I've broke down and cried.
    It's not right to do what you do
    Just keep on walking because baby were through.
    No more tears will fall from my eyes
    They are opened finally for the very first time.

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    Louise commented on Not right

    07-14-2009

    Good poem. Very emotional and inspiring. If you live long enough all of us have walked in your shoes. I love your positive attitude. You deserve better.

    PRober commented on Not right

    06-29-2009

    bravo! and if this one's personally motivated... hold to it!

    brado1962 commented on Not right

    06-21-2009

    Love your work. This one in particular surprised me. In such an experssive and moving peice, I expected to find anger. There is none. Just a confident declaration of who you are and what is right. Great stuff! Thanks!

    Chaos128 commented on Not right

    06-13-2009

    I was squirming a little as I read this one. I seem to recall words not to dissimilar to this being spoken to me. One point off for making the critic redfaced.

    miltmann commented on Not right

    06-05-2009

    very heart felt and sad written very well with a beautiful flow and good structure keep up the good work ps could you comment on my poem Cynthia-2

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    Allie’s Poems (13)

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    Forever 6
    Drifting 3
    Unsettled 2
    Through time 7
    Search 1
    A Letter To You, (Part !) 2
    Untitled 0
    Not right 5
    Forgotten 3
    What is peace? 2
    Untitled 1
    Slumber Bliss 3