Not the one.

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    to my friend jessica.

    Not the one.

     Don't let him ruin your life
    You can find better
    Its not like he deserves you as a wife
    He is nothing but a go getter
    You don't need him he's a jerk
    He will be a male prostitute
    Trust me it wouldn't work
    You can find someone better and cute
    He would be a burden
    Not a good husband
    I don't want to see you hurtin
    He stretched like a rubber band
    He goes away and snaps right back
    He is stupid too
    So be bigger and better and not a hack
    And remember that we all LOVE YOU!!!!! 

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    jessicanichole8 commented on Not the one.

    11-04-2010

    aww thatnk for writing that but i will never stop loving him and i think he is that guy but he prob. doesnt feel that way bout me
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    babygirl4028

    11/04/2010

    he does. THATS Y U GUYS ARE STILL DATING!!!!!!! well back together. and i am at home eating oreos!!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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