nothing in our hands

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do anything but good thing

nothing in our hands

everyone feels that he can do anything
do anything which comes in our mind
but it is not as easy as that kind.
when we start doing anything
there will be lack of something.
oh god
the ruler of the world
and the guide of our mind
shows us the way to do the things which we ought to do in our lives
and that
shows us the way for us to do things which can be anything.
worlds apart
and words apart
still everyone feels that he can do anything
do anything which comes in our mind.
we do not know that nothing is in our hands
and nothing sure is in our hands
except our devotion to work
devotion towards god
and finally
devotion to do a deed that is good for the welfare of others and
then you can be sure that you can do anything which is good.

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EyesOfRain commented on nothing in our hands

09-07-2012

This poem had a bit of circular reason, which in relation to your topic is perfect! We are unaware that nothing is in our hands, and nothing is surely in our hands! What a thought! I really liked this and you made your point well. Great job and way to make a person think.

giri

09/08/2012

thank you i did not expect someone would like this topic .But u hve filled confidence in me.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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nothing in our hands 1
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