Nothing
Already I can feel the
Raw sting of rejection as you read
Everything I've written about my
Life and everything in between that would
Yell out if it could
So that you could see that my life is hell and I...
I am nothing.
Nothing
4 Comments
Tags: Dark Poetry
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redbloodink commented on Nothing
12-18-2009
- I thought this was great.................. Red
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MarionYost commented on Nothing
12-18-2009
- I agree with June, This poem is AWESOME as is.. Sometimes so much can be said with so little. Great write. ! I loved this one. All the best -Marion-
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FindingJune commented on Nothing
10-28-2009
- I have to disagree with Dumplin. I think this is fantastic. I find it takes more skill and effort to covey a single thought, clearly and concisely. I, myself am a fan of brevity in poetry. I dig!
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10-28-2009
- Ok, um, it's too short. If you're gonna do a psycho babble spillage type of creative writing, it needs to be much longer. You need to let it ALL go and flow into your writing. Although not all poems rhyme, this one doesn't even flow. It's one long run-on sentence. Keep trying, dawlin', you'll get it. ;-)
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