Notions

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    Notions

    This's feeling's
    got me reeling
    got me
    s
    p
    e
    e
    d
    i
    n
    g
    for a ticket

    click it
            check it
                      book it
                              cook it
    that's just the
    w
    o
    m
    a
    n
    '
    s
    place

    screw you
                 i'm cool
                           i'm down
                                     while you d
                                                   r
                                                   o
                                                   w
                                                   n in a pool
    déjà vu
             you're a tool
                              you're a fool
                                              i'm just too cool for you
    so get l
             o
             s
             t

    you wont't be f
                       o
                       u
                       n
                       d

    see you next time around

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    Viper89 commented on Notions

    03-12-2011

    I like the poem but the vertical words is a little hard to read. You might want to consider changing it, unless it was meant to convey the way you felt while writing this poem like a bar graph, then I totally understand why!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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