now my life is through

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    now my life is through

    I remember
    all the love that you gave to me
    I remember
    all of the great memories
    I remember
    when you held me in your arms
    I remember
    when i felt safe from all harm
    I remember
    that you promised youd be here
    I remember
    that you left me here in fear

    in fear
    of loseing you forever
    in fear
    that we will never be togther
    in fear
    that this love of ours is gone
    in fear
    that we have come undone
    in fear
    that one day you will come back
    in fear
    that its too late, a simple fact

    a simple fact
    that your chance with me is done
    a simple fact
    that was my fault, that made you won
    a simple fact
    that makes my heart bleed
    a simple fact
    that you wanted to suceed
    a simple fact
    that says you never loved me
    a simple fact
    we will never ever be

    we will never be
    for i gave up your love
    we will never be
    for i chose someone else to think of
    we will never be
    because you reject my apologies
    we will never be
    because you will never let us be
    we will never be
    i hurt you too many times
    we will never be
    because i made it so you werent mine

    You arent mine
    because i chose this path
    you arent mine
    and that makes me very sad
    you arent mine
    but there's nothing i can do
    you arent mine
    so now my life is though

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    theladyz commented on now my life is through

    07-11-2009

    SunnyRain, I liked your style and rythm in this poem, you should explore this more. It's good that our lives don't actually end, usually, when our relationships do, isn't it?

    awalker2 commented on now my life is through

    05-30-2009

    Wow this was a really good poem. I felt what the author was talking about. This poem really speaks to you.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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