Now

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Trapped
    • ,
  • Memories
    • tstlove4never
    • check out my poems please i need the ratings on a few :)

    Poem Commentary

    I felt like i was trapped when i wrote this. Lost at hope of getting out of the situation i was in.

    Now

     I weep silently
    Those cold wet tears
    Ruuning down my face

    I laugh gently
    My sad, sad laugh
    Filling up the empty space

    I cry louder now
    Drowning in my sorrow
    Begging you to let me go
    Because I can't wait for tomorrow

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Tony commented on Now

    01-30-2010

    awww thats sad, the sadness can be felt through your use of words...good poem
    Reply to Comment

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    tstlove4never’s Poems (37)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Ponderment 0 12/13/2010
    Lost 0 12/13/2010
    Tears 0 12/13/2010
    A Dream 0 12/13/2010
    Fate Of Mine 0 12/13/2010
    Affected Life 0 12/13/2010
    Cycle 0 12/13/2010
    Russian Roulette 0 08/23/2010
    Ignored 0 08/23/2010
    Hatred 1 08/23/2010
    Hurting Me 0 08/23/2010
    Dead 0 07/20/2010
    Caught In a Web of Lies 0 06/17/2010
    Poem For an Angel 1 06/17/2010
    Pain You Bring 0 04/25/2010
    Listen 1 04/25/2010
    You 3 01/30/2010
    Breaking 2 01/30/2010
    Lies 2 01/30/2010
    Shouldn't Have Believed You 1 01/30/2010
    You Lied 0 12/06/2009
    Hated 0 12/06/2009
    Player 0 11/07/2009
    Life And Love 2 11/07/2009
    Now 1 11/07/2009
    Let Me Free 0 11/07/2009
    Meant to Be? 0 11/06/2009
    Times 0 11/06/2009
    Whats Going On? 0 11/06/2009
    Lost Mind 1 11/06/2009
    Pain 1 11/06/2009
    Hi? 1 08/02/2009
    The Truth 0 08/02/2009
    Love 1 08/02/2009
    Guess 0 08/02/2009
    What Happened 0 08/02/2009
    You know 0 02/05/2009
    Top of Page