Oceanic Memories

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I wrote this using the ocean challenge on the boards.

Oceanic Memories

Here I stand in the middle of the turf,
Listening to the sound of the surf,
Letting the waves crash all around me,
At this moment I feel completely set free,
I let Jesus take away my cares,
And let him mend every tear,
In this moment I find peace,
All the chaos of this world seems to cease,
As I let this moment enfold me.

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ginga commented on Oceanic Memories

07-28-2009

Alexis, Simplistic in its style and message but complicated in the mind's eye of the poet who lives it. A pure succinct message. ginga

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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