Ode to Rita

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When all else is lost  
life seems too much to bear
a day in the country 
will wipe out the scare.
It clears out the soul
And refreshes the mind
it's rain is so clear
and it's breezes are kind.

Ode to Rita

When it is Friday
I jump in my car
And point it towards Baldwin
It isn't that far

I'm going to Rita's
For laughter and fun
To soak in her hot tub
Or romp in the sun

WHen you're at Rita's
There's no one who cares
If your lipstick is smudged
Or there's hay in your hair

Take a trail ride at Rita's
But watch out for that Buck
if you fall on your ass
She'll be back in her truck

We talk politics, welfare
Religion and race
And how both of my children
Have fallen from grace

Rita cooks pork ribs
And fried green tomatoes
Pot roast and carrots
And new small potatoes

She has a heart 
Just as big as the sky
She is bold and she's brassy
Not awkward or shy

If there's a thunderstorm
Head for the barn
The horses don't mind it
They don't give a darn

Rita won't mind if
You're rich or you're poor
She'll give her opinion
She's frank to the core

When the stars stud the sky
It's the hour to head out
It is time to think hard
What this life's all about

"Good bye my love"
She'll say once again
"Drive safe and be happy"
She's a helluva friend.

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28jimmy commented on Ode to Rita

03-22-2010

wow i really like that keep writin and dont ever gave up

countrypoet commented on Ode to Rita

12-04-2009

Over the years I have made friends with a few people like this.It is a great honor for her to have you write such a glowing tribute to her.We all need more friends like this,who accept us for who we are and are always welcoming and supportive.Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. Terry

WordSlinger commented on Ode to Rita

12-04-2009

She sounds like a friend you had for a long time, it is a good feeling to write about friends, ty WS

icu2 commented on Ode to Rita

12-04-2009

Wow! I want a Rita too! You make sure and give this to her because it is a glowing tribute. Very beautiful.

Musicmynded1 commented on Ode to Rita

12-04-2009

I like it, it gives me hope for days quite like this; to look forward to a friendship in any manner is my biggest day-dream ever; so when i read such things as this it takes me away.

lucindaclaire

12/04/2009

Thanks much, poet. Your comments make my day brighter. I think I'll go to Rita's this weekend.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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