of His hands(revised)......

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

of His hands(revised)......

of His Loving hands

of His loving hands,
I am molded, into femaleness
by His desires........

of His loving hands,
I was created, blossomed
for His desires........

of His loving hands,
I was taught, feminine ways
serving His desires.......

of His loving hands,
beats a womans heart, shaped,
by His desires........

of His loving hands,
tears wiped away, tenderly
pleasing His desires.....

of His loving hands,
is my protection, strength
owing His desires......

of His loving hands,
is my existence, as woman
loving His desires...........

of His loving hands,
loves burning, for Him
fills His desires............

of His loving hands,
passions yearning, flames, ignited
for His desires......

of His loving hands,
I was born, tomboy, now His hearts slave, as woman
fulfilling my desires.......

Written by:
Asha`di
2010©

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Olan01 commented on of His hands(revised)......

08-31-2010

Lovely use of Haiku and I like how you continue the flow from one to the next in a steadily increasing stream of thought, well done.

ApaqRasgirl

08/31/2010

thank you dear for that sweet comment, that one was not actually a Haiku but know that you mentioned it, it is more like a Haiku then a regular poem.........thank you dearest for pointing out to me what I missed that was so clear.........so happy you enjoyed it.........loves ya asha

Olan01

08/31/2010

Many poets who write haiku and link them together will start with a 5-9-5. continue with 5-7-5 and tie the ending with the beginning by using a 5-9-5 and if I counted correctly that is what you do with this poem. I have linked haiku together to form a longer poem but stick to the 5-7-5 structure. If you have not read some of my haiku I invite you. Olan

ApaqRasgirl

08/31/2010

thank you dear, I will have to go back and check that one.........you have a wonderful eye for poetry my poet friend.......and I was thinking of using that poem in one of those animoto video things, I started looking into it last night. the only thing is that the free ones are only 30 seconds long........duno if I can get that one into a thirty second video poem.....thanks for the sweet comment as always........loves ya asha

blvdobd2009 commented on of His hands(revised)......

08-28-2010

If only every woman could be molded with as much care as you were handled, or if they could at least have the words to describe it as eloquently as you have if they should ever recognize it. This is beautiful simplicity with a large meaning, beautiful.

ApaqRasgirl

08/28/2010

thank you dear for the sweet comment, I am thrilled you enjoyed it.....thanks love asha

ginga commented on of His hands(revised)......

08-27-2010

Asha, True companionship is the bugle revelry hat repeatedly is echoed in this poem of passion. Love it. ginga

ApaqRasgirl

08/27/2010

thank you dear for your ever sweet comment.......glad you enjoyed it........such a great compliment you gave me on my words......thanks.....loves ya asha

knight4696 commented on of His hands(revised)......

08-27-2010

Asha .. What a beautiful poem my friend. I have to say that your writing impresses me very much. I love they way you convey! :) Awesome job! :) Ken

ApaqRasgirl

08/27/2010

thank you ken for that sweet comment, I am glad you enjoy my writing that much.......it means a lot to me that my words can touch the reader so..........thanks.......love asha

Balladeer commented on of His hands(revised)......

08-26-2010

Well, I have to hand it to you...he handled you well! This is expertly written, miss, and your words have such a believeability to them that I believe they are exactly what happened and I applaud you both for finding such a love. Beautiful write.

ApaqRasgirl

08/26/2010

thank you dear for that sweet comment, that is the truth exactly as it was with us, for he was my soulmate in life and I will be with him again one day when my times comes to pass over to the other side....I miss him alot, we were not married long just coming up on our first wedding anniversary when he was killed on his motorcycle going to work one morning.......but we had been together for about five years before we married.......a lot of my writings are about him and our love......thanks dear again for the sweet comment..love asha

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