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  • Nature

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    sitting out on the front porch

    Oh

    Oh tree,
    how can it be that,
    i envy thee

    Oh wind,
    don't follow that trend,
    blow a smile friend

    Oh moon,
    you make me swoon,
    I long to spoon

    Oh sun,
    do be a hun,
    don't burn my bun

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    JadeDragon’s Poems (10)

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    Oh 0
    Valentine 1
    The Beginning’s 0
    A Dream From Childhood 1
    The Awakening 1
    Sammia 6
    Smile 1
    Old Vs. New 2
    today 1
    My Love 1