On My Case

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    On My Case
    Everybody keeps getting in my business
    Just stay out it
    they always got something to say
    I dont tell them what to do with their lives
    yet if I get in your business its a problem
    but its OK if you get in mine
    I got my own life and you have yours so
    Stay out.
    Always on my case all in my face
    GET OUT

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    alreedus commented on On My Case

    05-11-2009

    A great selection of lines and words for a solid punch, my friend. These issues can become so emotional and I hear what you are saying. These things can be volatile. It is YOUR business, not others'. I especially like the last few lines that are poetic to the effect that you coold use them as a slogan. You could apply such a sign on your door or desk. "If you are in my face - well- get out and stay out!" There are no unceertain terms stated there. Good for you, lady. You have chuspah. I like it.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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