On the Edge of Love

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On the Edge of Love

A girl intense with a sense of pride and purpose
A move to prove what you may think is worthless
Jazz, pizzazz, a beauty, a cutie I wonder

Could falling for her put me under?
Could it be a blunder to thnk I'm in love when she may not be?
A catastrohpy?  Well let's see.

In poetry you can feel the way I'm feelin.
But are you willin to be in a situation that's illin?
Chill then, while I take you on a journey
Can end up in heaven or in court with an attorney named Bernie

Who can save all my earnings
But can't do a thing about the yearnings
I feel for girl I gave my heart and hoped would stroke it
But instead she joked, poked and choked it.

But am I wrong to think the worst? Should I
follow my heart and ignore the curse?  Could I
Withstand the pain and remain sane if she changed her mind.

Damn...I feel strange.

Never have I felt love like this.
A kiss from her lips makes me wish
I could freeze time and keep it there forever
Never ending through good and stormy weather

Whatever...I stare into her deep brown eyes and gasp
A moment sooo frightening...I again let it pass

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jademelissa74 commented on On the Edge of Love

05-27-2009

I truly enjoyed this one. It has a sense of style in the "real world" "An attorney named Bernie" was the kick for me :)) Keep the great writing!

Karmelpudding commented on On the Edge of Love

05-24-2009

very good, nothing like a man talking about a woman that he wants to take all in. I enjoyed reading your work.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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