On the Glade Path

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I don't know exactly why I wrote this, but perhaps it will spur someone to write even more effectively.

On the Glade Path

On the cool red soil that enriched the crude path, walked a confederation of reluctance, sorrow, and the grace of stunning beauty, to alight upon an amber glade by sun’s offerings. During sterling, still moments of her appointments, she was alert to Death’s ethereal presence. In a guarded sanctuary of solace, slid into a delicate pocket of her innermost being, resided her every hope and aspiration. There will be no trespass over this bridge, to gain entrance by force or deception, that she would unhand all of what her life was worth. Priceless are the biddings of my thoughts collective sum, that march into days expunged of color and harmony. I must cache away these moments, not lifted unduly, but carved and formed for a presentation to pondering good will, to benefit another who tarries in the ways of darkness.

Her paced quickened momentarily, perspiration rose up warm to the surface of her flush face and as the sun soothed her soft creased brow, a discerning comfort immersed her in a wash of gladness: she would not contend with soiled laundry today…it was Thursday!

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kage commented on On the Glade Path

01-22-2010

really good . kinda takes ya on a mind trip but ends in a dilemma causing me to remember of the things left yet on my schroll.

Marsink

01/22/2010

Kage, I thank you for encouraging words, from a fellow poet!

Aria commented on On the Glade Path

01-20-2010

You have perfected the surprise ending! Written so carefully, I could see her stepping daintily down the path only to flash (crash) before my eyes like a Tide laundry detergent commercial. This is too funny! Great humor, Mars!

Marsink

01/21/2010

I was overtaken by an impulsive choice at the last moment. I was going toward a sober glimpse of this woman's life, but the foul demon of humor...came out!! Thanks for the nice and friendly compliments.

SavVySam commented on On the Glade Path

01-20-2010

Hi Marck! This is a beautiful and contemplative piece of writing! "sterling, still moments" ooh nice word use! "Priceless are the bidding's of my thoughts" You are such a talented writer!

Marsink

01/20/2010

A hearty thank you, to the SavVy poteic of the week, Sam! I am glad you found it amusing, and back at you, for sure!

Londo commented on On the Glade Path

01-19-2010

Perhaps, but by Saturday that stuff is realllly gonna be ripe. LOL

Marsink

01/19/2010

Lon, thanks for spurring me on to help her get to the drudgeries in the next chapter

gogant commented on On the Glade Path

01-19-2010

A priceless gem of prose, Mr. Ink. Now go wash those socks, before making supper......................g

Marsink

01/19/2010

It may have started out that way, but has been diminished to 'bargain basement'. Thanks for the read, George! I am thankful

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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