On the Verge of Spring

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On the Verge of Spring

Winter wonderland go away
It's too cold today, yesterday
The sun comes out now and then
Please come back again

Snow is nice all the fluff
I love winter but enough is enough
Springis just around the bend
Can't wait for seeds to grow and petals to mend

1degees 2degrees 3degrees colder
So says the temperature holder
Snow is now melting, spring's on its way
The clouds change to white from grey

The heat is here today gone tomorrow
Spring is coming but way too slow

Drip drip drip water rolls off the ice
Out come the mice
One by one they come to bask in the sun
Yes, yes spring has won

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earthly commented on On the Verge of Spring

09-04-2010

Nice flow-our muses certainly are energized once a long cold winter ends-Nice write-Namaste...Earthly

Ninjaboy commented on On the Verge of Spring

05-19-2010

i like this poem a lot, though i dont know how to define it..... all i can say is good job, i mean absolutly amazing, i hope to read more when i have time, this is a new fav,..... keep on writing jj, and remember the most important part about the poetry, have fun with it.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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