On Wings of Green

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    On Wings of Green

    On Wings of Green
    Phread, 2005

    So, the other evening,
    I was sitting in the dusk
    just thinking about you and me
    and where life has taken us…
    when a bright green bug
    lit on the back of my hand.

    This beautiful bug
    so fascinated me
    that I let it stay there
    and just beheld it…

    My thoughts went to you
    for no real reason, since
    what does a beautiful, unusual
    insect with green wings so much
    bigger than its slight body
    have to do with you?

    I watch it move now
    my eyes burn from trying
    to focus every ounce of me
    on my new, green, winged friend…
    My vision blurs a bit as I see its
    finely netted mirror-image wings
    and I place it gently on the table…

    He rests, reminding me
    it is almost time to go to sleep.
    And my thoughts go back to you,
    So I reach my hand out to stroke your face
    I whisper my voice into your dreams
    and salty tears merge into salty waves
    waves I hope you will soon crest…

    I turn the lamp light off
    and realize I may never see my
    insect friend again …

    So, I finally understand
    what the oddly beautiful insect
    has to do with you,
    my love...
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    mlptaylor commented on On Wings of Green

    10-07-2009

    I love the pain and pleasure of nostalgia. You have captured it here, beautifully.

    Phread

    10/07/2009

    Thanks for your kind words.

    jademelissa74 commented on On Wings of Green

    08-03-2009

    Wow! This piece is full of anguish. The reader is reeled in to a world beyond imagination. You have the gift of crafting unique pieces that hypnotize the readers. You do not cease to amaze me. Great job!

    Phread

    08/04/2009

    Thanks for your kind words, JM.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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