One girl

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  • Sadness
    • SweetBlood
    • Wasn't it beautiful running wild 'till you fell asleep? 'Till the monsters caught up to you

    One girl

    I'm only one girl.

    What can't you see?

    All those words you write down are killing me.

    As you write I bleed.

    As your done I die.

    Why do you write these thing?

    Why do I cry?

    I'm a friend but he wants more.

    What the heck do I do?

    Do I cut myself into more?

    If people love me so much.

    Then why do I cry?

    Why dose he do this to me?

    Am I living a lie?

     

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    vincenzo commented on One girl

    06-17-2009

    the poem is pessimistic in nature. is belies the survival nature of man.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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