One last breath.. Before i die

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Another title given to me by a friend, Hope you like the emo shit ^.^ i do >.>

One last breath.. Before i die

It's cold out here tonight
the moon, so bright
grass so green and smooth
gentle wind, caressing to sooth

I can feel the pain
winter cold has yet to numb
I'm cheating, what a shame
heh, i wonder if they'll tihnk im dumb

I wonder what they'll say about me
laying here, bleeding under a tree
when will they find me...
in a week, in a day? an eternity?

will i go to heaven for this...
nah, im going to hell i know it
life wasn't all fun and bliss
infact is was the opposite

so now i sit here bleeding to death
when will i draw my final breath?
i wont even try to fight
It's cold out here tonight

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MarionYost commented on One last breath.. Before i die

01-29-2010

This write is very true, I know I've been there more than a few times. (Unfortunately) nice job with this one. All the best -Marion-

EvilPoems

02/09/2010

eh, so have I

Fallenangel87 commented on One last breath.. Before i die

01-29-2010

I can definitely relate to this write. Nice flow. good job with this one all the best -fallenangel87-

stever commented on One last breath.. Before i die

12-29-2009

wow another great poem...i seen you wanted title 4 new poems i was gonna use this as a band name [chainsaw suicide]

PoetsofBlood commented on One last breath.. Before i die

12-15-2009

This is a heart wretching metephore, perfectly written to eval life and the cold hearted response of human ignorance! Alexia's heart bleeds for you in this write-here my lil'horror minion, let me drip some warm blood in a cup for you-to help keep ya warm..see I'm not so evil,after all!-wink,Alexia

EvilPoems

12/15/2009

i love the taste of blood...

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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