One Last Word

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    One Last Word
    Remember me? Hey! Over here!!
    Why have you forgotten me when I was once so dear?
    Was it a lie, a way to get what you wanted?
    Why now do I feel so pushed aside? Why am I being harassed and taunted?
    Your sickness has infected my soul.  I don't feel needed, wanted or whole.
    The darkness invades me every night as I try to sleep. It angers me to my very core but no longer do I weep.
    I wont give you what you so fully desire.  You're fucked up in the head. You tried to pull me in but kiss my ass the feelings are dead.
    I don't know what my future will hold anymore but no longer am I your wife. Excuse me, you're "whore".
    Bits of me are still scattered but no longer will I let my heart be shattered.
    I just wanted you to look at me one last time as I walk away.
    Keep your bullshit for the next poor bitch that comes your way.

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    laydbak1 commented on One Last Word

    07-08-2009

    It's always a sad thing when a guy looks at and thinks of any woman as his personal slave; whether it be as concubine, baby-maker, housekeeper; or even bill-payer... but, some do... And, isn't almost cliche' that eventually any woman within his grasp of his ends up getting tired of being neglected and put down, gets her mind and soul back, finally appreciates her worth, then leaves the jerk to his own miseries....??? kudo's on a good write..
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    freind commented on One Last Word

    07-06-2009

    very nicely done now that is the way to do it. tell the world how you feel.he needs to get some of this. job well done.
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    optimistic commented on One Last Word

    07-05-2009

    This poem was good way of release, Great ryhme yet I see a since of accomplishment from the break up good write.
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    tenderpoison commented on One Last Word

    07-05-2009

    cathartic isn't it? I recognize this outpouring of rage, and I rejoice. it's nice to find that we are worth way more than we once thought...well done
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